Louise Hudson
Feedback: I feel incredibly biased and subjective by saying this but your front covers are fantastic ;)
I'd say the strengths is how great the improvement process was from your first draft to your fifth draft of your front cover. The changes really stand out and accentuate how hard you have worked on them., something I found rather difficult myself while producing my drafts. Other strengths include the sheer amount of detail, sticking to the three colour rule and the variety of fonts used.
There aren't many improvements I can suggest, but there are a couple.
The first being the background of your fifth cover as it is rather empty at points, but this is just me. Also, I feel more effects on your text could make it step off the page a bit more, as I feel it looks very 2D at the moment. Again, this is just my opinion.
WELL DONE! :D <3 x
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