Thursday, 24 January 2013
Tuesday, 8 January 2013
My personal feedback
After reading the feedback of my peers, it is clear that I have a couple of amendments to make. such as uncluttered my front cover, i will do this by taking a couple of things off and seeing what i prefer. Or I will re-arrange my cover.
Peer Assesment
Emily Devlin
Overall I think your blog is great and shows your hard work well, the layout is good too. Your front cover definitely appeals to your intended target audience, is well made and professional looking. It draws attention to possible readers and sticks well to the conventions. My only criticism would be that your cover looks slightly cluttered with the amount that is on it which could be seen as slightly over the top but apart from that you've done a great job! Well done. :)
Overall I think your blog is great and shows your hard work well, the layout is good too. Your front cover definitely appeals to your intended target audience, is well made and professional looking. It draws attention to possible readers and sticks well to the conventions. My only criticism would be that your cover looks slightly cluttered with the amount that is on it which could be seen as slightly over the top but apart from that you've done a great job! Well done. :)
Peer Feedback
Ben Naylor: This blog looks very exciting and fun. There's a lot going on throughout and looks like all work is completed to a high standard and a lot of effort has gone into it. The blog looks very neat and allows people to easily see the high standards of work which is included.
Your front cover looks absolutely class, really appealing and would physically drag your selected target audience toward it. They definitely wouldn't be leaving without it! There's not much I can say other then wow!
Don't even have any criticisms!
Your front cover looks absolutely class, really appealing and would physically drag your selected target audience toward it. They definitely wouldn't be leaving without it! There's not much I can say other then wow!
Don't even have any criticisms!
Peer Feedback
Name of person giving feedback: Daniel Swift
Overall assessment of blog: It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into this blog, and you've chosen creative ways of showcasing your work. You've also added a lot of detail and explanation to your work to explain your reasons for doing each step which is impressive.
Strengths of front cover: It looks like a professional front cover, it's very conventional and extremely bright so would have potential for sale in stores.
Areas for development for front cover: Perhaps use better quality images for the cover, just so they're clearer. Perhaps with better lighting, so it's more conventional.
Peer Feedback
Louise Hudson
Feedback: I feel incredibly biased and subjective by saying this but your front covers are fantastic ;)
I'd say the strengths is how great the improvement process was from your first draft to your fifth draft of your front cover. The changes really stand out and accentuate how hard you have worked on them., something I found rather difficult myself while producing my drafts. Other strengths include the sheer amount of detail, sticking to the three colour rule and the variety of fonts used.
There aren't many improvements I can suggest, but there are a couple.
The first being the background of your fifth cover as it is rather empty at points, but this is just me. Also, I feel more effects on your text could make it step off the page a bit more, as I feel it looks very 2D at the moment. Again, this is just my opinion.
WELL DONE! :D <3 x
Feedback: I feel incredibly biased and subjective by saying this but your front covers are fantastic ;)
I'd say the strengths is how great the improvement process was from your first draft to your fifth draft of your front cover. The changes really stand out and accentuate how hard you have worked on them., something I found rather difficult myself while producing my drafts. Other strengths include the sheer amount of detail, sticking to the three colour rule and the variety of fonts used.
There aren't many improvements I can suggest, but there are a couple.
The first being the background of your fifth cover as it is rather empty at points, but this is just me. Also, I feel more effects on your text could make it step off the page a bit more, as I feel it looks very 2D at the moment. Again, this is just my opinion.
WELL DONE! :D <3 x
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