2nd Draft, Double Page Spread

This is my second draft, as you can see I need to make some more changes to make it a great double page spread, created at the best of my ability.

1st Draft, Double Page Spread

This is my first draft of my double page spread. I am currently making amendments to it in order to create my final product.

Becky's Feedback

(see Feedback about the Feedback! for my response)

Feedback about the Feedback!

I am pleased with my feedback and I will take the corrections on-board by adding something new (such as a subscription advert) and not having all the writing on a strait line (so that it is easier to read) I will also make my page numbers stand out more by adding a small background, placing a blue shadow around the pick boxes and a pink shadow around the blue boxes and placing a page number on the image to make it clear what page the article is on. 

Peer Feedback - Sarah Vause

Strengths: Your contents page is really good, it clearly appeals to your target audience. I like the way you set out. You stuck to the same theme of colours which gives your magazine continuity. Keep up the good work!

Areas for improvement: Possibly add something like a subscription add etc.

Peer Feedback - Emily Devlin

Strengths:
The colors compliment each other very well and I like the fact you have got a picture of the cover with arrows indicating where everything is. It follows the conventions well.

Areas for improvement:
Maybe not having all the writing on an angle and just in a straight line? As this could make it easier to read.

Other comments:
Really good and well made, looks great!:)

Peer Feedback - Ben Naylor

It's really important that you kept the same colour's from your front cover and ran them through into your contents page - it give it a very conventional and realistic look. But I think it's absolutely class that you've managed to include a photo of your final draft of your front cover and incorporated it into your contents so people can actually see what you're going to include inside the magazine. The layout looks really funky and girls and would really appeal to your target audience!

I can't think of anything you could improve on!!

Ben Naylor.